Monday 10 August 2015

Once upon a time there was a very rude little girl called Rebecer and  she was horrible and of course her mum and dad where rich because all of the rich little girls are the spoilt ones this little girl got everything she wanted and one day the rude little girl said in her head what is the thing that I don't have and said to her dad I want a salt water Croc,
then her dad thought for a minute and said okay  but the croc has to stay in your room HORRAY ITS THE ONE NICE THING YOU'VE EVER GOT ME!!! and when the rude little girl got her croc he eat the rude little girl up and her mum and dad lived a happy life after that and gave some of there money to all of the people who didn't have any money THE END
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  1. Unknown10 August 2015 at 04:32

    Very good message in this story:
    1. Always be careful what you wish for
    2. Always be grateful, kind and appreciate what you have

    Im sorry Croc ate the little girl but maybe she deserved it LOL. This was a fun story and I look forward to reading more. Bye

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  2. Rukiya S10 August 2015 at 11:20

    Such a good story Ella, good message to the story. I have to admit, when I got to the part when the little girl got ate by the croc I burst out laughing. HAHAHA.

    Rukiya XX

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